Fluffy Days As they said, seemed a bit quiet, Perhaps start the fade at a bit of a higher volume, or maybe a quick little fade to get it up, then slow it down? Suggestions. However I thoroughly enjoyed that beginning, grabbed my attention right off the bat, especially when the piano came in. Kept my interest the entire way through. :)
The layering of sounds was very nice at 00:33 all the way through to to 1:00 when the other sounds almost dropped in volume to make room for that low yet prominent sound for 8 beats, then it hit off, really nicely.
The breakdown at 2:24, was very unique, I liked the fairy dust like sound near the end of it, where it hit off once more for a nice return of the melody.
Overall, I really enjoyed it, Your creative juices are definitely flowing :D.